5410.TWSE: LEO Systems, Inc.
Below is just a sample of the Company website (source: LEO Systems Introduction) Story Floods has reviewed with some preliminary suggestions. Should the Company decides to accept these edits, please extend the professional curtesy of informing Story Floods at support@storyfloods.com ; or if the Company has further questions, please also feel free to contact Story Floods at support@storyfloods.com
| Items | Suggest the Following Edits (as of July 31, 2023) |
|---|---|
| 1 | change to “The Company is dedicated in assisting its” + “information flow optimization, customer value enhancement, through “ + suggest global change to third-person pronoun |
| 2 | change to “The Company specializes in establishing customer service care centers tailored to different clients’ requirements, and providing ” |
| 3 | change to “The Company also enables clients to focus more on accelerating their industry developments.” |
