6158.TWSE: P-TWO Industries Inc.
Below is just a sample of the Company website (source: About/About P-TWO) Story Floods has reviewed with some preliminary suggestions. Should the Company decides to accept these edits, please extend the professional curtesy of informing Story Floods at support@storyfloods.com ; or if the Company has further questions, please also feel free to contact Story Floods at support@storyfloods.com
| Items | Suggest the Following Edits (as of July 31, 2023) |
|---|---|
| 1 | add the word “Company” + suggest global change to third-person pronoun |
| 2 | change to “Headquarter, the Company has factories” |
| 3 | change to “fulfill” |
| 4 | change to “since many years ago.” |
| 5 | change to “shared” |
